Wow writing must be in yoru family because your brother is really talented too. I loved this one.

''Come sing with me, be part of my band
The angels doth sing when the mic hits your hand
Your soft sweet voice can create weak knees
Just one more song, just for me, please?''

that was my favorite part of it i absaloutly love the words used for that, it creates good imagery .. Amazing.

you both are very talented

5/5