Crescent Star Love

by Faithless   Jan 14, 2009


Crescent coat that you wear
With faith you solemnly swear
Thickness that is not easily tear
Caution and always prepared

Promises we have declared
Feelings that we had shared
Extreme extend, to be a pair
Secret bonds, publicly unaware

The world has been unfair
Judging with cold stares
A true love that is rare
Leaving only a messy affair

Bloodsheds placed everywhere
Leaving me hopeless and despair
Nightmare couldn't even compare
Crimson dust fills the air

Wearing my star coat with six pockets
I still hold on your heirloom locket
Would you cover me up with a jacket
And take me away to another planet?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Very well done... I can almost feel myself in this poem...yay...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Your writeing is filled with alot of emotion and i can feel it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Again, another great poem. The flow, again, is excellent. You are an amazing writer. Best two lines for me...

    "The world has been unfair
    Judging with cold stares"

    So true. Our world is very judgemental. Great poem<3 I'd love to hear more, unfortunetly I'm too busy to comment more, but I'll take a look later lol.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    This is a very heartfelt poem. It has a great rhyme scheme.

  • 15 years ago

    by Quietly Versed

    Is this poem not somewhat about the holocaust? star jacket with six pockets? blood shed everywhere? maybe a jew and a german fell in love? and that is why the love was shunned? no one has mentioned the thoughts that this poem could be centered around "Hitlers germany"

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