Black.

by Neme juste un jouet   Jan 14, 2009


You never looked as beautiful as you do now,
sobbing to be saved-
is this not what you wanted afterall?
A color to describe would be black,
with a hint of that inky blue
right beneeth the surface of the truth.
Your lips are pale,
weak-
emotionless, maybe.
Love; this is the color black
like the pupil of your eye,
seeing everything fleeing
into a puddle rained from within itself.
You are a reminder
that some commit suicide
long before they die.
Who am i to stop the result
of your efforts all of this time,
spending your life away?
Welcome to this puddle-
black.

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This is interesting.....Just as I said before captilize the first letter of everyline..Very good but a little shaky in the middle but I enjoy your style of writing, It shows anger but love within the same..If that seems confusing enough...

  • 15 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    Woow. I am very spechless indeed.
    This poem deff blows me away.
    Probably cause I can relate.

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