Karma

You know what...I was just seeking something new in poetry..this poem was very unique..it so hit home for me..

A little black within the red
Blood flows through the veins
Our eyes await catastrophe
Smiling as it rains

This stanza was amazing...oh I just can't express how it's touched me..both first lines fit awesome together..the other two were very touchy !

I also loved the last stanza, I love how you tend to end your poems..that was very intelligent =]
You're such a good poetess..especially when it comes to your about-life poems.

Write on

Thats a very interesting topic you wrote on... a very philosophical one ... If i have to pick something it will be Karma ... because in long way that will decide the fate...

"Then the joy you thought existed
No longer seems sincere"

^^ wonderful lines... very deep...I felt like it is aking me look deep inside me ... the things that I think bring happiness... it is true or just an illussion ... or a veil that I have worn on my eyes...

very well penned...