Comments : Karma

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Thats a very interesting topic you wrote on... a very philosophical one ... If i have to pick something it will be Karma ... because in long way that will decide the fate...

    "Then the joy you thought existed
    No longer seems sincere"

    ^^ wonderful lines... very deep...I felt like it is aking me look deep inside me ... the things that I think bring happiness... it is true or just an illussion ... or a veil that I have worn on my eyes...

    very well penned...

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    You know what...I was just seeking something new in poetry..this poem was very unique..it so hit home for me..

    A little black within the red
    Blood flows through the veins
    Our eyes await catastrophe
    Smiling as it rains

    This stanza was amazing...oh I just can't express how it's touched me..both first lines fit awesome together..the other two were very touchy !

    I also loved the last stanza, I love how you tend to end your poems..that was very intelligent =]
    You're such a good poetess..especially when it comes to your about-life poems.

    Write on