by Ash Jan 14, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You can die but I won't cry, |
Wow! you said you were amazed by wut i wrote, i have to say the same about this poem. it was incredible and there were so many lines i loved in it. you told every part of this really well and it had good flow too, great job! 5/5 |
by Kitten
Wow after reading this I will definatly be reading your other poems. Very touching, very emotional, its grabs you and drags you in, you can't help but feel the emotion the saddness, pain, and anger. It was amazing. 5/5 |
Luvly poem yet again.. keep sharing ur poems... it feels so good to read.. pain at times & at times a story to smile 4 a while |
Well Ash that was quite an emotional poem, you got your message across so very loudly, a very sad poem of an expensive lesson. |
It's all cool........... |