by Faithless
Wow certainly you have penned down a heart felt, tearjerking poem. I can really feel the mother's pain of losing her child. It is certainly sad indeed that this war is going on and innocent people becomes the victime. Certainly you have beautifully illustrate the agony of mother losing a child and penned it down putting yourself in her shoe. I also like the idea of how you infuse and make the comparison of the Virgin Mary losing her son with this mother also losing her son. |
by The Prince
This is heartfelt and really moving, I could really picture the atrocities that have been happening. I feel that the message and the tone of the poem were fantastic, but the last stanza, to me, is a bit weak compared with the rest of the poem. The last line doesn't make sense gramatically. |
by NoUr
:'( no words to say :'( |
by Ingrid
Moucha.....*cries* |
by Sarah
Amazing...Truely amazing ! |
by slighte
This is heartwrenching.. What is the world coming too? |
This is one of those poems that tugs at the readers heart. This piece is very very sad. All the children who have died in Gaza thus far is so devestating. Well done, this poem was well penned with pure sadness. I wish that situations like this one in Gaza wasnt the cause for the loss of many innocent children. Its so terrible. |
by Blissful
Beautifully written CJ and full of emotion. Very sad and heartbreaking to read, you just brought the whole scene to life. |
by Siglawoo
It was like each hair of my body would straighten up with reciting each word of your poem ..... |
by Nawa
Wow !! amazing poem, very touching and heatbreaking. No one can possibly imagine what those mothers are going through right now whether it is one of their children or five the pain is all the same. You have done a great job with this piece, your words were strong and emotional just like your story. Good structure, and well penned. Amazing !! |
by Nee
Okay First off..the idea of the poem was the only good thing in it.. |
Wow, this made tears come to my eyes, very emotional, and just wow, wonderfully written, the emotion is exactly what youd see in someone that lost their own child. |
Wow this brout tears to my eye's i feel for this woman pain. |
It's a meaningful poem. It was all right. Some parts I thought were strong others I thought were eh. Good job though. Four out of four. |
by Good Enough
I hate this war. i hate it soo much. all these innicent children getting hurt. :,( its weakening my heart to hear these or read these poems. 5/5 |
Omg this is sad |
by SashaMirage
Wow you made me cry with this sad poem. But this is exactly the kind of poem we need to show the world to stop this war. You did a great job with your description of how this mother must be feeling. 5/5 |
by Katie
This poem is so heartfelt. A wonderful piece of work. You do an amazing job at capturing emotion. Good job, and thanks for the comment. :) |
by sneha
To touch these tiny holes in your body, I just don't dare |
by Angel Tears
This was absolutely amazing. I could feel the emotion behind this piece, and the tears built behind my eyes. I loved it. 5/5 |