Beacause Of You

by iFallToPieces   Jan 14, 2009


I am broken hearted,
Or is it torn in two?
My heart stopped beating,
Because of you.

I thought it was healing,
But I guess I was wrong,
It started breaking,
When I heard that Love song.

The lyrics were,
So sweet and true.
Until that is,
I saw the real you.

You left me crumpled,
Down on my knees,
Wishing so hard,
That you would not leave

I guess I was wrong,
You were not made for me.
Why was I so blind?
Why couldn't I see?

You only meant to hurt me,
You did not care at all.
Why was I so stupid?
Why did you let me fall?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Paiger

    I really liked this poem, very nice flow, and good emotions. I did find tho it lacked some originality, the idea of this poem has been done before and I thought you could have tried to find something to mix it up a bit, some more interesting vocab or a new metaphor. Don't take it the wrong way, it's just some advice, the poem was still really good, just some things you could do to make it great.

    4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I think this was one of your better pieces. Sounds to me like the guy you are talking about, is a lot like most teenage guys. Not all, some are actually really nice. Your poem was really good, i liked the title, it reminded me of that Kelly Clarkson song.
    A really good write, keep up the great work.

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