I think this was one of your better pieces. Sounds to me like the guy you are talking about, is a lot like most teenage guys. Not all, some are actually really nice. Your poem was really good, i liked the title, it reminded me of that Kelly Clarkson song.
A really good write, keep up the great work.

I really liked this poem, very nice flow, and good emotions. I did find tho it lacked some originality, the idea of this poem has been done before and I thought you could have tried to find something to mix it up a bit, some more interesting vocab or a new metaphor. Don't take it the wrong way, it's just some advice, the poem was still really good, just some things you could do to make it great.

4/5