What a beautiful and intense write! Porcy is right.. your grammar is always amazing. I really loved this.. the form was incredible.. and you used it to its best. This was so creative.. i dont really know what else to say, although it really was a very good write.
5/5

Ingrid you are an amazing poet. I admire your writing styles. Each sentence brings millions of thoughts to the mind. This is my favorite line "Flames of love and lust burn." I sincerely believe that one cannot work without the other, both love and lust are essential in a relationship to keep that everlasting burning flame that we all dream about. Very well done my friend, 5/5, kel.