Real emotion in this poem...well done :))

I think you did a good job on it. Well written.

NiCE.!! l0VEd it.!! i CAN t0tAllY RElATE.!! WEll N0T N0W bUt A fEW M0NtHS AG0.!! ANYWAY, iT WAS VERY WEll WRiTTEN ANd i ENJ0YEd EVERY liNE.!!

This poem was overflowing with emotions and they were very vividly portrayed. There was a bit of anger and hurt in this poem that was clearly seen as the reader read. I thought you did a good job with that part of the poem, the flow was decent, the only thing I had a problem with was how you didnt capitolize your I's.. I's are extremely important to capitolize.. remember to use proper grammar. :]

Other than that, I thought you did pretty well.

5/5.

:( it is sad! I loved to words u used and why you used it ! keep it up !

Absolutely beautiful :)

Awwh...! I absoulutely loved this poem!
5/5 =]