I think it's a great poem. Even if it's not supposed to be it's very good. I like how it doesn't rhyme, because sometimes rhyming poems aren't sticking to the subject. And sometimes rhyming can make it just seem weird like the words are just in it to rhyme. I love this POEM! <3
5/5

SP

I liked it. I've felt like this before too. it's a nice poem. hope you don't think it's not. =P your feelings were put down and I felt a lot of the stuff that you're feeling. =) I hope you feel better. take care. good stuff. =)