by Behind Blue Eyes Jan 15, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Somebody please help me. I'm in such a daze. |
by Nobodys Hero
This poem has a very good rhyming scheme but I feel the flow would run more smoothly if you replaced your full stops with commashere and there ^^ Overall I really enjoyed this poem, you placed emotion into the poem beautifully making it beautiful read =] |