by Not Enough Jan 15, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
first love
***please rate and comment it's really long but if you could try to read it all it would be greatly appretiated THANX!*** |
by H E Losey
It felt as though I was reading the same thing just in slightly differing words. I know there is rhyme but the flow is way off for me(I'm a bit "old school" and look for rhythm). There are some context errors ("to" where "too" should be) so It could use another proof reading. |