Comments : Change (Huitain)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A much beautiful poem, dear Silvia.

    It has a deeper meaning for me personally, since I have made amends with someone very dear to me.
    To be lead astray is something awful, but God watches us always and I have a feeling that He has His ways of showing us what is true or false in the end.

    Never stop writing:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes change is good and sometimes we hope
    it is for the best. Liked the form as well as
    the message you conveyed.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Change is very important if we want to progress through life, especially if we have been led astray and want to get back on the right path.
    I loved it, really interesting form which you wrote to very well :]
    5/5