Hey hun....
great write... i love it.... hope u 2 are ok... she seems to be good for you when ur not a prick aye... sort shit out you dont the hard times or heart ache that iv had nd got.... wish you both well nd hope its all ok.... nd remember if u need sum1 2 yell at im always up for a good fight...

mwah much lovs sweetie....

This was sweet, i could feel the emotion, depth. its perfect. beautifully written.
--lovedroughtmelody

This is such a beautiful and meaningful poem. i can relate...only a few problems....just watch out for your punctuations. some of the words need apostrophes and some are incomplete....other than that i think the message in this poem was very strong and easy to relate to...also it gives the reader an insight on their own thoughts...so it did for me....only a great writer can write such a meaningful poem.
Keep it up!

Ada
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

This was also a really good poem! it was amazing and i loved it! gr8 job<3

Hey long time no talk... great poem by the way... i enjoyed it a lot... keep it up your very talented with poems =D
xx

Good Job 5/5

Good Job 5/5