What a lovely collab :] I really got into the story and then to find out it was just a dream?! How heart breaking. It was written really well and i enjoyed reading it :] I couldnt even tell who wrote which stanzas.. i have an idea, but it definitely wasnt obvious. The flow was very good also :]
A very well written love poem. I hate it when dreams seem so real.. and then you wake up and its like a big disappointment.
A fantastic write,
5/5
Good luck in the contest!

A beautiful collab, you both did a wonderful job! What love was running through this poem, a love growing up to the point where he proposed, and then you found out it was all just a dream...Great twist at the end and a joy to read. Take care, 5/5 from me....