by Sylvia
Excellent write once again. Powerful and full of meaning in so few words. 5/5 |
A really beautiful format, I have never heard of it before, but I thank you for posting it, now I can try it sometime later. Your words were very powerful and moving, and it really shows the awfulness and results of war, how we must keep on praying for them. Touching write, thanks for sharing! 5/5 from me, take care.... |
Well done you got the message across precisely and with few words |
by Cara
Your poem is a brilliant piece. I really liked the note you added at the bottom also, its so true.. while people are starving to death, food is sitting around wasting away. It really is sad what the world is coming to. Its an interesting form that you wrote the poem in.. really well done as usual :) |
An angry powerful piece here Ingrid, again showing your talent of producing work with few words, but ones that shout out real meaning. |