This was a good poem and really confused me at the sametime. Most of the time I enjoy figuring out exactly what the person is writing about, at first I thought it was your parents, then perhaps an ex-bf or gf. This poem is a mystery to me.

I wasn't struck with just throwing old english in here and there. I don't think I've ever heard or seen anyone use "Shan't" in any poem that I've done.

I enjoyed the poem but felt that you could have taken out the old english parts and it would have added to the enjoyment of the poem, I wasn't struck with the old englishesk type of poems.

I think that his poem is another compliment to your unique writing style.

Thank you for your comment on my poem. I've been busy lately I apologize for not reviewing one soon, but I had to prioritize.

Yours Sincerely,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior.

I read this more than six times, and every time I find something new I like.

You created great rhythm/ flow throughout the piece. I like short stanzas and the rhymes too, they add fantastic effect to the poem.
Also, your choice of words is pretty clever from the beginning to the end. Overall, every stanza holds something utterly memorable and powerful.

- Forbid my heart to sing?
How dare you humble me!-
^^^
These are astonishing opening lines. At first, they pulled me deeply into the poem and made me really want to read more. Simple, yet so amazingly written. All in all, captivating.

Every stanza is equally good, and I found this truly refreshing and poetical.
Greatly done.

Hmm.. it's hard to find a vivid poem these days but thn i find it in here. nice poem mixed powerful emotions are well emphasized, flawless as it is.. and honestly i have to re-read it a couple of times to understand what are you trying to portray.

Darling, die within demise.

^ This line is too wordy to stay with your flow. Would flow way better with only 5 syllables.

Forbid my heart to sing?
How dare you humble me!

^ I really enjoyed your opening lines, they drew me in and gave me the desire to read further and see what was going on.

Other than that one line your flow was spot on and I enjoyed this piece. good work.

Keep it up yours are good

Right now dont get me wrong I think it's a good poem but the old english you used just diddnt give that deep impact for me. The flow worked quite well but it was a little choppy here and there. I did find it a short poem but it contained a lovey write.
Overall it's a good poem, I was attracted to read it because of the heading.

No-no-no-no
That can't be it.
I refuge to let you stop the story half-way through.
This poem was amazing but it felt like it ended way to soon.

other than that I think HORROR should be HONNOR.
but that's just me.