Hold Me Tight, Don't Let Go. (Monchielle)

by Courageous Dreamer   Jan 17, 2009


Warning:
This is my first attempt at a Monchielle.

Hold me tight, don't let go,
Cradle me in your arms.
Do you feel my heart, beat?
Listen attentively.
It speaks of words so sweet.

Hold me tight, don't let go,
Stay with me forever.
I'll love you til I die,
never letting you down,
Gladly calling you mine.

Hold me tight, don't let go,
Embrace the love we share.
Entwined as one, not two,
Curing each other's pain,
Our future, we'll pursue.

Hold me tight, don't let go,
I won't let go of you.
Love will flow from my heart,
Endlessly speaking truth.
You had me from the start.

Monchielle:
4 stanzas, 5 lines
Each first line is the same
6 syllables per line
3rd and 5th rhyme
2nd and 4th free

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    A very beauifull poem =) I think for a first attempt at this particular style youv'e done really well. It's always nice when a writter trys different ways of portraying / formatting poems because it makes you a stronger writter. Excellent job, it's a very good write =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A really unique format, and you have done very well for your first time at writing it in my opinion. In this piece, you clearly express your love and affection for him, and emotion is just flowing through. Great work, this was very enjoyable to read and I thought it was a sweet love poem. 5/5 from me, take care...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    For your first attempt you did a very good job with this form. The poem itself is also very good. Each verse could stand alone as a poem itself. Excellent work. 5/5

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