Comments : Pasts Apart From Now

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    I love this poem, deep, real, raw emotions, heartfelt. perfect.

    I truly have found love, and am happy for once.
    I'm sick of your complaints, fed up with your stunts.
    All I want, I have, and I'll leave it at that.
    And if you cannot see it, then fix yourself, STAT.

    ^ that was my favourite stanza. it was perfect.

    --lovedorughtmelody

  • 15 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    Lovely poem
    you wrote hear instead of here
    but you're a great writer keep it up