by Mitelia Jan 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I loved a man once, when i was young |
by Rocky
That trully was a good poem. i love how you used repitition in it. it was truly afective. it had rythm to it that let it flow and a nice unforced rhyme scheme that lent it a certain beat. it is easily your best work i have read so far. keep it up |