Wow... I really enjoyed this poem... My favorite part was probably... |
Very good indeed, i especially like many of the rhymes in this poem such as "away" and "disarray" |
by Nobodys Hero
This is a very sad and emotional poem, I really enjoyed reading it =] The overall flow of the poem could be changed a little here or there but other than that its a very beautiful piece so I will give it a 5/5 |
by Hollymariee
It's beginning to crack |
First off, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. :) |