The kill

by Ingrid   Jan 17, 2009


The kill

Upon the green meadow a shadow is cast
as a predator high up in the air seeks its prey
Unaware, a little rabbit hops about without a care
Never knowing this will be his final day
All adult rabbits stand idly by
as they observe the scene
Unable to warn the youngster
while the shadow grows
Then the inevitable takes place
as all sounds fade away
the buzzard descends
a swift wind, rushing of wings
and takes his prey
The last the rabbits see
are two innocent brown eyes,
completely taken by surprise
Grabbed by mighty claws
he leaves his group in agony

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A sad poem Ingrid, but one with good imagery as is usual with your poems. I could almost feel the buzzard tearing at my flesh in your words!
    Well penned.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nature is sometimes cruel but it is a necessary thing to happen to preserve the balance. Never the less, it is a cruel thing to watch. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Hmmms. I like how you added in the other group of bunnies witnessing the scene and not being able to do anything about it.

    Good imagery, good job. ^_^