Comments : Seperated from the Normal World

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Wow, this was good. soo heartfelt, deep, full of raw emotion. i could feel the pain and suffering.

    A single thought,
    a split decision,
    now shes gone,
    with no indecision.

    ^ a perfect ending to an amazing poem.
    --lovedroughtmelody