Where'd You Go

by Wishmaster   Jan 17, 2009


The day has come long last
Never felt like this in the past
Who knew that this where I'd be
Who knew that this would happen to me
Going to a place where I can the one, the only
Not living so lonely
This pressure pushing me away
From the man I want to be today
I can't do this alone
Can't be in my own little zone
But there's one thing I want to know
Where'd you go?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gem

    A sweet little poem

    "Going to a place where I can the one, the only
    Not living so lonely"

    I would maybe make that second line a bit longer if possible as it throws the flow off a bit but apart from that, the poem is great.

    Excellent rhyming and emotion!

    5/5
    Gem

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