Something Inside

by Tsukuyomi   Jan 18, 2009


Quick, children run while you can,
For inside me is the boogeyman,
From inside my blackened soul,
he reaches out with his devilish hand,
Something only a few understand,
having a beast inside,
Where not even I can hide,
This thing building,
screaming,
Tormenting,
feeding,
someone help me destroy this
this monster in me
it won't let me be
tearing and shredding me
why can't it just flee
alas, it will never leave
to stay and kill me slow
this I know,
It won't let go....

(Yeah I know this sucks but whatever.)

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    You said this sucks? Wow, not be rude but you are kinda wrong; its amazing! Fantastic job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lost Innocence

    You need to have beter faith in your self...someof the poems i wrote i wrotye when i was like 8 so don't think your poems suck.......they are really good

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This poem far from sucks. The style, flow and rhyme goes really well together. I really enjoyed reading this, wow. 5/5, Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Marcus

    Huh... what makes this poem so divinly captivating is that the fact it is just a mixture of "Stuff" lol.. Yes "Stuff" it's poem that forces it readers to almost create there own thoughta and feelings about what it mean. Althoght it sounded like one of those "I just want to write something poems" it is truly thought provoking! Good Work

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This does not suck. It's very deep and emotional. I loved it. Keep writing babe. Shanik

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