I really liked this one.
I'm glad to see you're writing again. :D
It was a great read, thanks for posting it on here. :]

Great write, it was all so captivating and the descriptions were as vivid as ever. Nice job, I could clearly see what was going on and the wording was excellent! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing.

This does not suck. It's very deep and emotional. I loved it. Keep writing babe. Shanik

Huh... what makes this poem so divinly captivating is that the fact it is just a mixture of "Stuff" lol.. Yes "Stuff" it's poem that forces it readers to almost create there own thoughta and feelings about what it mean. Althoght it sounded like one of those "I just want to write something poems" it is truly thought provoking! Good Work

This poem far from sucks. The style, flow and rhyme goes really well together. I really enjoyed reading this, wow. 5/5, Em

You need to have beter faith in your self...someof the poems i wrote i wrotye when i was like 8 so don't think your poems suck.......they are really good

You said this sucks? Wow, not be rude but you are kinda wrong; its amazing! Fantastic job!