Everlasting Conflict (between my brain and my heart)

I can totally relate to this poem, i have this problem too. But my heart usually wins out in the end, even if I do get hurt. But amazing poem, great write :)

This was very amazing!
i love it!
you have so much talent and it shows
great job on this one<33

My brain and my heart have never been friends
In fact they have always been enemies number one
When my heart is on it's knees begging me to stay
My brain reaches out a hand and says come

^nicely way of openin your poem here. with the second stanzal go "always been number one enemies" it sounds a bit better to me. also it was very imaginie.

This is a conflict that has no solution
It has been going on for these 22 years of mine
When my heart says that it wants to fall
My brain decides that he is not the right guy

^oh wow. this reminds me of this one song called "issues" by the saturdays. it's a realie nice song that relate to this. a fight between them that never seems to end.

I can clearly see a picture of them in my head
My heart with a halo and my brain with the flame
My heart saying that it's not fair to loose an opportunity of love
But my brain shouting that my soul has been through enough pain

^I can relate to this part. and many girls have as well. getting there heartbroken not wanting to fall again but u cant control your feelings for someone but ur mind keeps telling you No. once again very imagie. could see the heart with halo and ur brain with the flame. i wouldnt change a thing.

They both have good motives
And their arguments are strong
Leaving my poor soul in confusion
Afraid to make a desicion that will turn out to be wrong

^wow a very touching n powerful part you wrote here. flow is just great.

Whenever my brain is right
It is quick to rub it in the face of my heart
For leaving this frozen soul of mine
In unimaginable pain and torn apart

^this reminded me wen i rub wen im right to mi chicko. once again i could see that happenin while readin your piece. you have a way with words indeed. =]

Every time my soul is hurting
It decides to next time listen to the brain
But as soon as love comes around
The heart is jumping and screaming, driving my soul insane

^amazing words. simple very simple but sends such a strong message. war against eachother never seems to end without ur brain or heart getting hurt.

So when you ask me why I have troubles making up my mind about love
Think of my sould that wants to see things clear
But is unable to make a desicion
Because of an everlasting conflict that never wants to disapper

^amazing way of ending your wonderful poem but "sould" shouldnt it be "soul" ? i truly loved it cuz I can realte to have a war with my mind n mi corazon.
5/5 for me

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Wow like i must say you have created one amazing poem here!!! i could so relate i mean who hasn''t had their heart and head having a dispute?! so many girls will relate to this
you did a great job with words !! the only rough spot for me was the first stanza the second and last line seemed to forced with rhyme i think that you should re arrange the second line to say "In fact they have always been number one enemies" it flows better!! than you could fix up the fourth line accordingly !

great job though!! honestly i loved it : ) 5/5

This is one of the best poems, that i've read, perfect flow and your diction was breath takinh. i loved reading it. Shanik