by Nobodys Hero
Aww this poem has a very sad ending but it was an enjoyable read =] The flow was nice and consistant and the rhyming added more quality to the piece, great job |
"What's she to you? |
by Teria
My darling boy, |
by holly
Wow, thanks a lot, that was really helpful and i like a lot of your suggestions and will definitely use some so thanks :) |