Alone

by XxRed RougexXKoRn   Jan 19, 2009


All alone
bloody and bruised
with a broken bone
so confused
where did it all go down
it was perfection
it's cause of that f**king cow
that I'm now a blemish
in their perfect world
well i fought back
and watched her curled
and it is now a fact
that she is a loner
cause of what she's done to everyone
she now hides in that corner
for she knows i have forever won

*also not about me*

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Full of emotion, great pom!
    xo

  • 15 years ago

    by Tiiffaanyy

    Wow
    that's really sad and short
    but still very good
    alot of emotion and anger in that

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cierra

    I liked it. it was short but thats okay i write short poetry too, but keep it up really nice poem with emotion

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Short but good! i just got a little confused in it to be honest i didn't get the connection between you guys!? like was it her that hurt you or like a bf? it might have just been me though i get confused easily

    I thought this was a very emotional and heart felt piece! 5/5

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