Short but good! i just got a little confused in it to be honest i didn't get the connection between you guys!? like was it her that hurt you or like a bf? it might have just been me though i get confused easily

I thought this was a very emotional and heart felt piece! 5/5

I liked it. it was short but thats okay i write short poetry too, but keep it up really nice poem with emotion

Wow
that's really sad and short
but still very good
alot of emotion and anger in that

5/5

Full of emotion, great pom!
xo