I actually rather like this one. Each poem I've read of yours, is a little better than the one I've read previously. Maybe the next one I read will be the best poem in the world, lol.

Anyway, I liked the feel of this piece. I liked the aggression and paranoia. I also like the length of this, and yoour other poems I've read. Sometimes short poems are better. Anyway, overall I thought this was a rather good piece.

Brad