Why part one

by Cierra   Jan 19, 2009


Why can't we all have fun
why does the mother lie to the son
why does hell seem to exist on earth
when will we get our chance for rebirth
why does cutting yourself relieve the pain
at the end of the day all matters will be the same
why why don't we tell the truth it's all a lie
what is living when you don't know what it is to die
why do we steal or harm
were all one person with god as our charm
why is whats on everybody's mind
but i guess we wont know until the end of time

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece I felt was a lot better. It knew where it was going and what it was doing. I particularly liked the content of this line:

    what is living when you don't know what it is to die

    But I did think that the line is a little out of place with the otehrs, as it's a little longer, and sort of breaks the flow of the piece.

    Brad

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