This world

by Cierra   Jan 19, 2009


Is it anger is it pain is it fear
wondering what got us here
in this cold world that you call home
you can't help it but feel alone
to see everything and stand down
until maybe you feel like going the next round
seeing pain and trauma and hurt
thinking your gonna do something you do it revert
just sitting there on your thrones
while others are suffering without homes
and you treat people this horrible way
no wonder we have suicides everyday
and it seems everybody is aware
it's just a shame nobody seems to care

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This piece had it's good parts, but for the most part, I didn't think much of it, and I think this is mainly because of the words - they just seemed rather weak. Throughout, the poem seems like it's a little lost, and is finding the words as it goes. The piece got stronger towards the end, though.

    Brad