by Cierra Jan 19, 2009
category :
Life, society /
about society
Is it anger is it pain is it fear |
This piece had it's good parts, but for the most part, I didn't think much of it, and I think this is mainly because of the words - they just seemed rather weak. Throughout, the poem seems like it's a little lost, and is finding the words as it goes. The piece got stronger towards the end, though. |