You are the one I think about,
Who makes my heart quiver.
You are the one who is out so far,
And makes my body shiver.

^ Beautiful. The first and second line had to be my favorites.

Thoughts of you make me smile,
And I don't want them to ever go.
I'd take that chance to wait forever.
Even if my feelings, you'd never really know.
^^Maybe make it "Even if my feelings showed" instead of what you have? "Even if my feelings" doesn't make that much sense. But beautifully written.

Truly, you are somethig special.
Even if you don't think that way.
A place in my heart is where you will be,
And will always forever stay
^^Somethig should be something. You should put a period at the end of the last sentence. Thrid line was my fav.

So please know that you run through my mind,
And I would never want anything more.
Than just to talk to you everyday.
Because you are the one I really do adore.
^^My fav part of the whole poem. A beautiful ending to an amazing poem.

I realy liked it. Though there was a few mistakes, the flow was great and I really liked it.

5/5

<3 Krista
Keep it up.