by Cara Jan 20, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Your feet skim the ground as you tear along the abandoned street |
by SashaMirage
OH wow Cara I really hope this is not a real story about you. The poem is great and it is very powerful, you definately had my addrenaline pumping with this one. 5/5 |
by PoetryKnight
This is an awsome poem. Not to long ago there was a robbery here in the fort of Indiana. Well, the dude came in and we tried to hide, two of us got shot in the arm to insure we would do what they wanted. Try hiding, it did not work. lol. 5/5 |
by Alicia
Amazing job! I was drawn in from the first word to the last, and I even read it twice! 5.5 ^_^ |
by Sylvia
Another excellent write from you. It is dark and had me holding my breath until the very end. I just recently found your poems but shall read more of them in the future. Good job on this. 5/5 |
by Faithless
Well well you have captivated me again with this thiller piece of yours.I can feel paranoid too as i was reading thru and waiting in anticipation wat's gonna happen next. |