Wow this is absaloutly amazing, i enjoyed reading it very m uch. you have a great way with words.

it was very intense
and kept me interested in reading it

"Sighs, I can't catch my breath
Cries, there's no comfort in our death
Bleeding, fingers screeching down my soul
Staring into Guilt's jaws that form a gaping hole"

that was deffinantly my favorite part, it gives you such an erie feeling.

very well done

5//5

This was fantastic