Forever's Obsession

by Faithless   Jan 20, 2009


Measurements of desired dimension
Fairy tales plays magical illusion
Fulfilling my everyday addiction
Mind held captive in my own prison

Facing life's trials and tribulation
Drowned within my own delusion
Creating a world of perfection
With a twist of my mind's version

Lingering around my distraction
Escapade to an exotic location
controlling all weathers and seasons
Within my own works of fiction

Movement lose it's function
Life's unregretful decision
Choosing daily hallucination
Stuck in dreams never to be waken

Love letters left unwritten
Sleeping into the deep blue ocean
Journey through forever's obsession
Pills overtakes my confession

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  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Another wonderful piece. :)

    "Measurements of desired dimension
    Fairy tales plays magical illusion
    Fulfilling my everyday addiction
    Mind held captive in my own prison"

    In the second line, I think "plays" should be "play" - "fairy tales play.." sounds better, to me anyway, than "fairy tales plays". Also, I think "fairytales" is one word, but I'd look into that.

    The rhyming was awesome, as was the word choice and flow. The emotions (again) shine beautifully. You have an amazing talent.

    Briana

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very unique poem. I think at times we all create our own dream world. It would be nice if we could stay where we make things the way we would like them to be.
    Good Job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    This is really great, and it really caught my eye... 5/5...check out my poems too....

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    The title of this poem really dragged me into it. It certainly lived up to my expectations.

    "Mind held captive in my own prison"
    I LOVE this line. This line stood out to me more than anything else. Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Obsession is an ugly feeling but you shouldnt take pills to releave the pain

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