A wonderful piece. a spectactular dedication. i loved the emotions you showed. a quite creative piece keep writing! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Yeah, this a great poem, true feeling and meanign behind the words. This is what we should all strive for! Awesome job

This poem make you sound like an extremely loyal friend. I feel as though anyone that has you by there side can fight and make it through anything. great job!

I thought this was pretty good and heartfelt it just kind of seemed like something was missing. The flow was shakey at times and their were a couple spelling mistakes. It was weird because you used the proper grammer almost the whole poem, but in the 5th line you put "thru" and in the 3rd last line you put "your" and it should be "you're" you are = you're. I'm going to give this poem a 4/5 but not because of the 2 spelling mistakes those are easy to fix. I just thought you could have expressed your thoughts deeper. good job

Wow!!
Excellent poem. Really nice work, keep up this good work... Hey! U r really nice poet (5/5)