Comments : Burning desire

  • 15 years ago

    by Ariel

    THiSz P0EM WAS GREAT, iT HASz A VERY NiCE RHYTHM, iT RHYMED ALL tHR0UGH0UT, AND i REALLY l0V3 y0UR STR0NG, V0CABULARY CH0iCES.

    "Your magnetism pulls me near,
    To the exhilaration of your sear,"

    tHiSz ^ AB0VE STATEMENT, WAS 0NE 0F MY FAV0RiTESz iN THE P0EM... yEW HAVE A GREAT MiND, && p0ETRY iSz CERTAiNLY Y0UR G0D-GiVEN tALENT!.. 5/5 i L0VEd iT!..
    <3 ARiEL~