by Rachel Jan 21, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the end there's nothing left |
Very Good Sweetie, u just said it all . U are good! Take my word. |
by Saving Grace
I enjoyed this one. I thought it was emotional and well expressed. The rhyme scheme was excellent. But i think in some parts your flow could be worked on. But apart from that its an awesome poem. keep it up |