To answer your question I love this poem. Of course I did you won the contest because of it. It is the kind of poem that I was hoping to get out of that contest that I started. I wanted a poem that would really make the audience think about what they just read. you pulled this off wonderfully.
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As for the poem itself. This poem truely relates to me personally. I found that I could easily relate to it and just how universal it could be. The Rhyme is BEAUTIFUL and I couldn't ask for better.