I really enjoyed this poem, To be honest it's one of the best iv'e seen on here in a while =]

The flow was carried through all of your stanza's and the rhyme was consistant, great work. As for the poem it's self I found it to be an emotionally honest piece that was beautifully written.
5/5

Nice poem. I give you a 5/5. Your rhyme was great and the flow of it was nice. Good job.

For an unintentional poem it came out really good

Oh woww ,
it flowed so nicely,
and i really enjoyed it,
especially how it ended with the 'i love you' bit.

'I've given you pain, misery, deception and lies
with each one of my transgressions, part of us dies'

just wow. that part was soo well written
(Y)

i gave you a 5/5

cindy -