Truer words were never written. Excellent write. 5/5

Amen to that, dear Cara!

You words are so true...indeed what would one gain by leading a fake life? It will only attract people ans situations that do not suit you.
Clever girl*smiles*

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Gotta admit that's not one of your best.
the idea is amazing..I loved the way you structured it and btw I loved the image Jen brought..it made each one of the competitors write his own way which I find is really great.
your portrait was what I needed to say..I guess you spoke out for me..just not the ordinary poem I was expecting to see.

Buuut, the reason why I gave it a 4/5 is because your rhyming words..again Cara don't focus that much on the rhyming words..they go cliche and lessen the beauty of the poem..no matter how amazing is the concept.
You should work on that =)

"It's funny actually, watching this insanity from the outside
People will do anything to fit in, but what will it provide?"

Loved those two lines
your title was good, the portrait was amazing, you only need to focus on your wording.
Loved this piece =]
Write on xx

I don't care who thinks this poem deserve less that a 5. But certainly this is a winner for me. Your poems juz keeps getting better & better. I think you're definitely one of the elites of the club.I like how you take the image and interprete it in your own way

If standing up for what you believe in, leaves you all alone
Be proud to stand by yourself, you can make it on your own

^^ I think your ending just sums it all, yup it's true that if you dun fit in becoz you're not liker the rest, just stand up for yourself and be proud of where you stand

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

This si the frist poem that really have ture wizdome in your words cara , and i can say you pineed a lot of things, what will it provide if you jsut go what society want or ask.
jsut be yoruself , you are geting wizer i wonder why ^__^

great poem

5/5. The message is straght-Be yourself.Great.God bless.

It is a good poem, I would have to say. keep it up and I'll read more,
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WOW, This was excellent, i loved the flow and the wording. Wow, it was just wow.

Finding it hard to fit into society's circle of perfection
Always standing alone, sick of dealing with rejection
The certain image that apparently I just don't portray
Is taking over the world and leading everyone astray

my favourtite stanza! it was just greatlly written and just made me want to read more. Great Job

5/5

Wow Cara these are the most amazing words you have ever written! I feel like it was written for me. This should definately be the winning poem of the week. Everyone needs to read this and make a stand to be who they are, I agree. I really love and cherish every line of it and it is going on my faves so I can read it daily to remind myself that its great to be who you are. 5/5

I really like this poem it has a very good meaning to it 5/5 Caleb "Poet With A Purpose"

I lOve this One.... Very, very relateable yet again... Perfect rhyming, perfect flOw.

``Finally I realise that being on the outside isn't at all bad
At least then you get to be yourself, of that I am glad
If standing up for what you believe in, leaves you all alone
Be proud to stand by yourself, you can make it on your own
--> I lOve this. Superb ending. I strOngly believe in the last line and try my best to always dO sO.

Great JOb!! :)
5/5

It's always interesting to see how we can work with contest/word challenges.

This was a very enjoyable read, It stood out! Sometimes when things are written for contest like this, you can tell but your wordings and direction as a whole was indeed a circle of perfection.

You're very talented!