Comments : Outside The Circle

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I really like how you penned this down...writing a journey of an outsider tryin to fit in.This poem kindda reminds me of how i first joined this club...itz only like about 2 mths after i joined the club...tt i feel tt i kindda fit in.So thx for writing this coz im sure many can relate to this poem

    I am accepted into this circle,
    no longer an outsider.

    ^^^I like how you end this poem.. kindda how i feel now towards the club

    Excellent Job
    5/5