This is very good(: I like how each stanza has the same words rhyming. It is unique. Please go read and comment my poem like this. I don't think mine is very good...it was my first contest entry(:

I like it.
You connected the title with your poem, that's very good, it's not easy(at least for me) to write a poem that's folowing a given title, but you did it very well.5/5.