Making it through life without you.

by xx   Jan 21, 2009


Making it through life without you
has taught me something new:
Never give your heart to someone
if they won't give theirs to you.

Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.
Oh no, this "poem" was terrible.

Sorry, I was young.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is so sweet! I feel like your poem comes straight from the heart!

  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Wow. This is amazing! I could feel all the emotion in it. You're a great writer, especially writing about Twilight. Keep it up! 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Woah, another Great poem. Wow this was wonderful. a very beautiful love poem. it's sad and i can feel the emotion but it is all put together very well. Wow, Great Job.

    Keep it up (:

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    This poem is probably one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever read.It's so sad, it shows the emotion you feel inside, and makes even the reader sad.i like how the title flows constantly during the stanzas.Well done.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    Dang, and I thought I was obsessed with Twilight.... you beat me in that department lol.
    But your poem is absolutely amazing! I loved every second of it. The line,
    "My heart left with you when you left me"
    Was heartbreaking. I could feel the emotion extremely clear, throughout the entire poem. I loved it. ^_^ 5/5

    Alicia (Thanks for the comment)

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