Lust ( Tyburn)

by Ingrid   Jan 21, 2009


Lust ( Tyburn)

Needing
Craving
Controlling
Raging

My trembling body needing, craving
Pure and raw lust controlling, raging

Tyburn - A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 8th syllables.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Tyburn? Tyburn? Come on, woman! Surely you're making them up now, lol.
    Ingrid, every time I look over your poems I see another form that you are knowledgeable of whilst I flounder in the dark of ignorance!
    Lust! Temptation is indeed a wicked foe when dressed as lust.
    Great write Ingrid and all the very best
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Ingrid

      Lol! Nope, all these forms really exist, Ben! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Wow! What a very descriptive poem, and yes, where would we all be without Lust!! lol!
    Again, you show your superb talent of being able to provide scintillating imagery in so very few words!
    You have a real talent Ingrid!
    Your words take on a life of their own.
    Now I must take a cold shower! lol!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Excellent :] Steamy, i like it. I really liked this form, i think it fitted really well with what you were saying. Very great description of lust, i really enjoyed this write.
    It just shows how endless your talent is :)
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Very good description of the lust ingrid, indeed it is raging ^_^ now calm down girl lol
    ^_____^

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You certainly captured and expressed lust very well in few words. Like the first comment, slow start and the last two lines speed the read up. Good job once again. 5/5

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