Comments : Making it through life without you(contest entry)

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    I love your poem! It's beautifully written, if I could offer one critique, spell out your words and capitalize (u=you i=I). It just makes it a little easier on the eyes of the reader.

    The stanza,

    "making it through life without you
    would be a waste of time
    your hugs are so addicting
    and without them my life would be a crime"

    was absolutely wonderful! I just love your style! ^_^ 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    Cute poem. Emotional. Beautifully written, if I may say(;
    "I wouldn't be able to get you off my mind
    Your love I could never forget"
    Such a great line. I love it.

    Respectfully Edward's,
    Cherish Rose.

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Beautiful poem.Written in a very good style.
    "making it through life without you
    why would I want to try
    your kisses make me melt
    and without them I would cry"
    these lines touched me...i loved them:)
    5/5.Very well connetcted the title with the poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Annie aka shadow

    This poem made me cry
    becouse that how i feel about someone i cont be with becouse he moved 5 years ago.
    My best friend

    Annie